Wednesday, October 7, 2009

My primary 1 composition

Write a story about a magic show that u have seen before.
Ur story must not be more than (80words).
You are allowed to use singlish and adding smilies to your compo.


One bright sunny day afternoon, Mrs 老 Lee Lee Saw her small little red fighting fish (da jia yu) not moving..must be kena fighting lose 了 and die liao. -.-

老 Lee Lee, zit tao go call her mother to help save her fighting fish..
the mother go add COOKING Salt into the water..hoping that the fish could stay alife. -.-

Few hours later.. The RED fighting fish turns WHITE colour!..
Wow! That was a great magic!
From red become white..
I think she is try to copy Michael Jackson. Go bleach its skin.. -.-
I love this "magic" performed by Mrs 老 Lee Lee , i wish to see that again :D


The end~

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